It’s what you feed pigs… or is it the act of feeding pigs… both?
Which ever it is, it’s pretty much how I feel about Last Call: Cease.
Denouement still needs some work, but I also needed a break from it. So I moved on… and was immediately depressed by Cease. It’s sloppy. I don’t remember it being this sloppy.
From the opening sentence onwards, I have a lot of work to do. Yes, publication is several months away, but I’ve had this story written several months ago. It should be much cleaner than this.
I hate being behind schedule.
So once I’m done with my web comic duties, I’ll be reading and rereading Cease. Getting it ready for the viewing public.